In Pieces
Life, shattered, laying in pieces around me
Dreams that once were, no more
Faded wisps of what might have been
gently disappear with the breeze
Heart, broken, jagged pieces left bleeding
Tears mingle with the pain of broken wings of want
Sighs heard, quietly in the dark corners
like soft bells of desire, never to be heard again
Thoughts, scattered, pieces of a once treasured puzzle
Wishes float in the air, then pop, broken like fragile bubbles
Memories of something that almost was possible
now gone, as if it never was……..
Maybe it wasn’t meant to be
these pieces of me
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Though painful and dark this a well written and moving piece.
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Thank you Kim, just getting some dark stuff out of my system.
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Do what you have to do. I understand.
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Beautifully written, but harrowing to read. Keep good people around you if these feelings are your own atm.
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It’s ok Lizzi, thank you, just getting some stuff out of my system.
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Writing is always a good way to get stuff out of your system. Cathartic indeed.
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That it is. Works for me most times.
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This is a beautiful poem.
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thank you Jaded
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Well written, but it wore me out … so keep your head up!
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Thanks Frank! I will keep the head up.
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What a wonderful way to express those deep and harrowing emotions, Jackie. A powerful poem, indeed. Thinking of you. xo
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Thank you! We just need to keep stepping forward.
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Well written. I’m sure many others can relate to your words. I’ve been there many times but always come out the other side. Hope things are getting better for you.
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I have been here before too Marlene. I will be ok and everyday is an improvement.
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This is a very strong sad poem, deeply touching. Thinking of you my friend and trusting all is improving, even if slowly.
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It is and it isn’t my friend. But I will survive.
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