Friday Fictioneers ~~ Feb 28, 2014

THE CHALLENGE:

Write a one hundred word story that has a beginning, middle and an end. (No one will be ostracized for going a few words over the count.)

THE KEY:

MAKE. EVERY. WORD. COUNT.

Thank you Rochelle for another great Friday Fictioneers. If you want to see what the Friday Fictioneers is all about click here. If you want to read other great stories based on the same picture, click here.

Copyright -Sandra Crook
Copyright -Sandra Crook

 

Genre: Literary Fiction (98 words)

“The hay is making me sneeze!”

“Hush Hanna! The driver will hear you.”

Aaaachoooo! Mica the hay is driving me crazy! It itches too!”

“Would you rather have walked to town?”

“When Papa finds out we’ve run away to get married, he is going to be so angry.”

“Once we are man and wife, Hanna it won’t make any difference.”

“You are right, I will stop complaining.”

“We are almost there Hanna. Once the tractor slows be careful jumping down. Soon we will be man and wife.”

Once down, they heard a voice………

“Well daughter, what have you to say for yourself?”

 

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54 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers ~~ Feb 28, 2014

  1. Dude, your page looks so legit right now. Can I brag here? Seriously, I refreshed the page just now because I had the window open still from your last page, and wow. I hope it works for ya!

    \m/

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  2. uh-oh… i guess Papa’s one step ahead.(or behind.) too bad for the couple. but i suppose they’re to young anyway so he might be doing them a favor πŸ™‚ great story. also, the blog looks fantastic. πŸ™‚

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          1. Yes I gave him some idea of what I wanted in it, he did the rest. I love the details he puts in, like the coffee cup and pencil holder. Those were his ideas there.

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  3. Congratulations on the new blog–great look. As far as Papa goes, he is a determined man. And he might be right–Mica sounds awfully anxious to get married–is he after Hanna or her dowry?

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