Hello everyone! Welcome again to Friday Fictioneers. This is where talented writers get together every Friday (or Wed, Thur) to write a 100 words based on their own interpretation of a single picture. These stringing of words will inspire, make you think, go wow!, and will pull out of you all sorts of emotions. Please click on the leader of the group’s name (Rochelle Wisoff-Fields) and you will be transported via internet magic to her blog where you can read the very few rules we writers have to follow, if you want to join us. Or you can scroll down and click on the cute little blue critter you will see there. It will take you on a wonderful journey to all the different writers who make his group so great. Read their stories and be amazed!
THE CHALLENGE:
Write a one hundred word story that has a beginning, middle and an end. (No one will be ostracized for going over or under the word count.)
THE KEY:
Make every word count.

Genre – General Fiction ( 100 words)
She sat with her eyes closed, face toward the sun. Her body relaxed, her palms laying face up in her lap.
This was her favorite spot. Quiet, full of the lushness of nature. Birds singing, bees buzzing, wind gently teasing the bushes.
She was still as death. He watched the slight fall and rise of her chest to make sure she was breathing. Yes! There was movement to attest to her living.
He moved to touch her shoulder, his fingers gentle. Slowly her eyes opened, sharp intelligence glowing in their brown depths.
“Madame President, it is time to give your acceptance speech.”
Beautiful!
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thank you!
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Well,that’s why they call it fiction, I guess 🙂
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Bravo! I think you can see into the future 🙂
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so right!
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Fiction only for now. 🙂
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Madame President, right on! I loved this. Let it be so.
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We can hope. 🙂
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Some blissful R&R before the big moment.
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We all need to recharge before a big moment, right? Thanks for stopping by Frank 🙂
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Wonderful descriptions – and I love the girl power element to your stories!
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I found out a long time ago, anything a man can do women can do, they just have to find a different way of doing it sometimes. 🙂
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Jackie, you have an unusual take here and did a lovely job of it.
janet
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thank you Janet! Have a great weekend!
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Dear Jackie,
I certainly didn’t see that ending coming, but I loved it.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle.
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This sounds like the start of something…
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It certainly could be.
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Madame President, nice. ^^ (and in my mind , they’re inlove) hehe wonderful story in so many aspects
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Ahh, you caught the ‘gentle hand’ part. Good for you! 🙂 and thank you.
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Definitely a surprise ending here–following a successful buildup of interest. Nice.
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Thank you vb! Appreciate you reading 🙂
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Now that was a surprise! Well done.
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Thank you Sandra! 🙂
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That twist was just great. Being able to relax fully is probably why she’s president in the first place.
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That was my thought. For such a stressful job you need to relax as you can. Thanks for reading Bjorn! 🙂
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Beautiful work.
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Thanks Hookster!
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Nicely done!
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Thank you 🙂
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Like that she’s really in the zone with her meditation. Great take.
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We can dream (meaning it would be great to have, not just a woman president, but a truly peaceful and spiritually aware president too. I am cynically thinking if a candidate was spiritually evolved they
wouldn’t run for president in the first place or would find it impossible to get elected…but good on you for keeping a positive outlook 🙂
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have to have a positive outlook in today’s world or I would go nuts with despair. I am always hopeful that a new kind of politician will emerge and people will open their eyes. I’m an opptimist. 🙂
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I do recall reading this when you first posted it. Very nice. I loved the ending. You are always great with unexpected endings. 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙂
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