Hello people! Once again it’s time for that world-famous Friday Fictioneers!
Thank you Rochelle, for hosting us every week. You do a most fantastic of jobs!
If you don’t know what FF’s is all about….where you been??? Kidding. Sort of. Anyway, FF is where around 100 people write a 100 word story based on the same picture. It’s a wonderful way of honing your writing craft or just reading some great writers. Either way click on Rochelle’s name and it will take you to her blog. That’s where you can read her amazing stories every week, or you can scroll down till you meet the blue critter, click on him and be taken to a land of many stories. Or even better join us!
If my story today is bit odd, I blame it on meds I’m taking for a toothache. LOL That’s what I’m sticking to.
Genre: Tongue in Cheek (100 words)
I been working on placing these stones just so for nigh on 60 years. Old woman Hessa they call me. I be old and my name is Hessa, so I guess it fits.
I was ‘told’ to do this many years ago. A booming voice woke me up one night from a sound sleep.
“Hessa! Make a mighty patchwork of stones on the ground. Work it daily. Pick the best rocks and lay them end to end. You will be rewarded greatly for your faith!”
So I work every day to make this perfect.
I just wish I could understand why the voice sounded like my cousin Will’s.
Oh that Will! That made me chuckle, but I do so hope she didn’t spend her life working because of a practical joke.
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Seems like she did, but in her way she’s happy. Thanks Melanie!
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Funny 60 years. Kept her busy for 60 years.
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That it did. Thanks Kim. 🙂
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Ha Ha this was fantastic. Good to see you back doing Friday Fictioneers.
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Thanks Lois! Good to be back 😉
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Your cousin Will is very persuasive. Good take on the image Jackie, you have done well.
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Well Hessa’s cousin was always a persuasive sort. lol Thanks for reading, Michael.
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Very interesting take on the photo. If it was cousin Wills practical joke. Old Hessa got the last laugh. It kept her body moving and arranging those rocks just so could be very meditative. It could give one purpose.
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Well I think Hessa lived longer than Will, so you just might be right!
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🙂
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That would be a lot of stones she laid down. Hessa is dedicated. Perhaps, Will haunts her dreams. Fun, original story! I hope your toothache feels better. Ouch!
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Thanks Amy! Hessa has a one track mind it seems. And yes tooth is feeling better, thanks!
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What a cruel practical joke to play on poor Hessa 🙂
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It was for sure. Thanks for reading! 🙂
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Dear Jackie,
Of moments such as this, great religions are born. Very well done.
Aloha,
Doug
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Dear Doug,
I never thought of that, but you are right. Thank you!
Jackie
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Dear Jackie,
They should call her Gullible Hessa. You made me laugh. From end to end very well done.
Where there’s a cousin Will there’s no way. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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LOL Rochelle. I’m glad I could make you laugh. I do love your sense of humor. 🙂
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Great take on the photo…not a bit odd in my book 🙂 She’s happy and occupied with her patchwork, whoever asked her to build those stones. So good to see you doing the Fictioneers again. Have a great weekend w/o toothache!
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Thank you tiny! You have a great weekend also. Tooth is much better today. 🙂
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You never know, maybe Will was a vessel for a greater being to speak through. Just maybe not a nice one.
(ps–unless I get a visit from Customs in the next week wanting to know what I am trying to sneak into Canada, you should be getting some mail soon!)
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Well it could be Will was a vessel. Just doubt it was from a greater being LOL
Yay!! I love mail!
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lol funny! not for Hessa, of course… but i have a feeling that she’ll never find out. how cruel! haha
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Jackie, that end made me crack up in laughter.. poor woman.. and I hope that cousin Will get his punishment somehow.
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Will is a rascal for playing with her Faith. Good twist, so well done!
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Hello Frank! Good to see you!
yes, Will is a naughty one. lol Glad you liked it.
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🙂 Hope you’re feeling better now (physically, not because of the story.)
janet
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I am feeling better, thanks janet. 🙂
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LOL – brilliant, Jackie. Now I know what your cousin Will sounds like 😉
I hope your tooth is feeling better soon – yuck, I hate toothaches xxx
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Thank you Dianne. Tooth is good now. xxx
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YAY 😀
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Jackie, Will needs to find a few of those stones in front of his door or in his easy chair. This cruel joke has been going on far too long. Poor woman. Looking on the bright side, she’s been getting good exercise. Well written. I hope you’re feeling better. 🙂 —Susan
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She is a dedicated woman and I’m sure Will got what was coming to him. 🙂 Thank you Susan and yes I do feel lots better.
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Haha! this is awesome!
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Thank you Michelle!
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Dear Jackie, I think Will is a stinker and it was probably his job, and he pawned it off on Hessa. Oh well – This is excellent Jackie!
Hope your tooth gets better! Nan 🙂
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Yeah, Will is a bad guy. But it’s ok Hessa enjoys her work. Thanks for stopping in and reading! 🙂
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