This week’s Weekly Writing Challenge on WordPress is from none other than our own esteemed Rara!
“This week, we’re asking you to consider things from a different point of view — to walk a mile in someone’s shoes. Leave your moccasins and bunny slippers at the door, and tell us a tale from a fully-immersed perspective that is not your own.”
Now, according to Rara, this perspective can be fiction or non-fiction. So for my story I am going fiction. Well, sort of fiction. I’m going to do a story with three different viewpoints as seen by my dog Sam and my two cats Pouncer and Notwen. All three have very distinct personalities which I am going to try to capture in words.
I have often thought these 3 have conversations when I’m not around. They probably talk about me all the time, the brats. I’m going to attempt to do this in flash fiction form.
Sam: Oh boy! Oh boy! Look, look, look! They have my favorite show on TV. There are other pups on TV! Hey guys, come look! I wonder why they won’t talk to me? Maybe I should bark louder and then they’ll see I’m here and they’ll talk to me! Ruff!!! Ruff!!! Ruff!!! I wonder how those pups get in this funny box thingy?! I want to get in there too! Maybe from the back side? I’ll go look. Nope, can’t get in that way! Hey over here pups!! I’m here and I want to play with you! These stinkin’, lazy cats I live with don’t want to play with me!
Notwen: There he goes again with the TV. Stupid dog is always interrupting my nap. Why does he have to be so noisy? Can’t he see that I need my sleep? How is a fine-looking cat like me suppose to prowl the house at night if I don’t get my cat naps? Sam! Shut up!! Those animals in that darn TV can’t hear you, stupid dog! Why did my human have to get that dog in the first place? She should know cats are better! Maybe since I’m awake anyway, thanks Sam you mangy dog, I’ll go head butt my human and see if she’ll feed me early. She might as well do something much more important than playing with that stupid dog.
Pouncer: I just don’t know why I have to live with two such animals as these two. I should have been an only cat. Really! Sam! The TV animals don’t hear you, so be quiet or I will have to take a swipe at you! I am NOT amused by your rambuctionness. Brother Notwen! Please stop complaining for a change! Oh, and if you will, please pull some food down out of the self feeder for me. I hate getting food crumbs on my paws. I simply am not made to dig my paws in my food! I simply don’t know what my human was thinking! She just wasn’t I’m sure. Sometimes I wonder if I am the only one in this household with brains. This is just unacceptable! I shall talk to her sternly. Later though, as I must have my nap.
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Haha! This was fun to read! 🙂 I love to guess what cats and dogs think or say to each other. You have three cuties!
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Thank you TJ! They are cute and I swear they have conversations like this all the time! 🙂
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Haha!! Jackie. You really clinched this one. I really enjoyed this. Pouncer is my girl.
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Thanks Kim. Pouncer is a little princess. haha.
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This was so cute, Jackie! As adorable as those cats are, you know I love dogs, and Sam has them all beat. Aren’t dogs the funniest things with the television?! We used to put Animal Planet on for the dogs when we knew we’d be gone all day. I later stopped doing that unless I was sure there wouldn’t be any abused or neglected doggie-story shows to upset them. 😉
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Maddie!!! I just sent you an email girl.
Oh Sam is the man of the house. He loves his TV. Oh I can’t stand to watch or have Sam watch hurt animals. I’m more upset than he is. He is so funny though, he looks at me like, Mom! Why won’t these pups play with me?? 🙂
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Oh, there is Sam from your comic strip! You kitties are gorgeous. This was really fun, Jackie.
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Thanks Amy!
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🙂 Fun post, Thanks for the trackback too
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You’re welcome! Thanks for stopping by. 🙂
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That was a lovely read! I bet you’ve got it spot on, too 🙂
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thanks! I think I have them down pretty good. 🙂
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Haha! This was fun. Sam’s such a little cutie. Sometimes my dog will just sit around watching sports on tv. Now I wonder if she’s trying to will herself into the show with mind power.
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He he – right down my alley! Sam gets my vote 🙂
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I will tell him that tiny! But somehow I think he knows already. haha. 🙂
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yes, I suspect that too 🙂
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I am certain you have their conversation exactly correct. You can see it in their eyes, can’t you? 🙂
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