Old Memories
Handmade toys, long forgotten
Faded photos, tarnished frames
Abandoned? Why, I wonder?
Someone’s past memory.
Pocket watches, old glass faces
Dusty with age and time
Despite faltering, life went on?
Someone’s timeless memory.
Purple velvet lined jewelry box
Empty now, but for stale air
Hopes and dreams once lay inside?
Someone’s cherished memory.
Dried flowers, sad and alone
Once were brilliant, now long dulled
Were they picked from the garden below?
Someone’s perfumed memory.
Peeling, cracked paint upon the walls
Rooms decaying, long ignored
Love once rebounded thru the halls?
Someone’s long forgotten memory.
Lovely Jackie, you captured the image so beautifully.
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Thank you Michael, I tried.
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You did well.
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I enjoyed the circular nature of this one Jackie. My favourite was the flowers (fourth stanza) and how the smell of them remained, even though their beauty faded. It’s also interesting to see questions being asked to engage the reader and make them ponder about what is going on. Old memories – gone but not forgotten 🙂
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thank you so much David. I loved the picture so I tried to capture the mood of it. 🙂
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I love the way you changed the word describing “memory” in each last verse. lovely job, Jackie.
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Thank you so much. So glad you enjoyed it.
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Truly moving! Wonderful poem.
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Thank you Kimberley.
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Beautiful! My favorite poem for the month so far!
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awww thanks tiny! big hugs!
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Very sweetly written. Pretty melancholy words.
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